Essay Structure

This would be my first essay and essay structure that I have produced , its only in basic rough at the moment as I know improvements will need to be made. My written skills are quite poor as well as my true in depth knowledge of the subject I have chosen to write and essay about. Also I find it very hard to produce written pieces of work. Also I have a real problem understanding and written complex words as you may see below.

Essay Structure

Impact of Mobile phones on society

Introduction the the topic:

Will include an introduction to mobile phones, when they were commercialized , the uses , what they are able to do , include the stages of development (ie; just a phone to texting to mobile internet) who the target audience is (who uses the fones and a rough impact it has on there life , could vary from businessman to student to a mother keeping an eye on her kids) , could also explain the "trend" that comes with mobile phones (eg; Iphone , everyone wants one) ........... To be continued

Middle

In this part of the essay i will be explaining the different types of features mobile phones have and will conclude the impact they have on the different audiences(people) , give examples of recored impacts on peoples life , whether its made a difference , good or bad.

End

Conclude my results/findings and come to a definite verdict on the impact they have had on todays society and possibly include changes that could happen in the future.

Thankyou for reading , I know there is most lilely a few grammer errors within the above sentences, id also wish if anyone thinks that certain sentences should be included in different sections of the essays , id like them to say and maybe give advice, whilst complying with the rules

Kind Regards Lee Garnham